Actually, I don’t have any special requests; I just view criticism as an opportunity to look at my work through someone else’s eyes and learn something.
Yes, regarding the yellowish tint - when you change the color balance, the airiness and sunnyness are lost. In my opinion, I left it as is, but maybe there are some interesting options?
Not a bad portrait at all. The girl is very sweet, her gaze is not empty. The only thing that bothers me is her hand. I don't like the way it's positioned; you can't see the fingers, it looks stubby. And I'd like to tweak the color a bit; the highlights are distracting and there's too much light green. And I like the cropping better this way View crop The branches on the left recede, so they don't distract or interrupt the frame. On the left, all that's left around the girl is foliage, which nicely frames the frame.
To avoid such a painfully difficult task with color balances later, it's best to read the light right away. In this situation, it filters through the foliage and produces horrendous green reflections, which naturally doesn't brighten skin tones, for example. And of course, there are all sorts of lighting issues, the plot isn't very good, the character is rather weak, and so on.
And I'd like to tweak the color a bit; the highlights are distracting and there's too much light green.
And I like the cropping better this way View crop The branches on the left recede, so they don't distract or interrupt the frame. On the left, all that's left around the girl is foliage, which nicely frames the frame.
And of course, there are all sorts of lighting issues, the plot isn't very good, the character is rather weak, and so on.