Spring mood
Spring mood
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Photo by Oleg Egorushkin, photographer. Spontaneous portraits: spring, woman, foliage. Published 20.05.2011.
Critique The author has requested critique for this photo. Feel free to share your honest feedback in the comments.
Comments 12
Oleg Egorushkin
20.05.2011 22:33
Actually, I don’t have any special requests; I just view criticism as an opportunity to look at my work through someone else’s eyes and learn something.
Oleg Egorushkin
20.05.2011 22:37
Yes, regarding the yellowish tint - when you change the color balance, the airiness and sunnyness are lost. In my opinion, I left it as is, but maybe there are some interesting options?
Andrei_L
Andrei_L 8.78
20.05.2011 22:38
Overall it's nice, there's a bit too much green and some overexposure.
Aleksander Pasyura
20.05.2011 22:44
nice photo
Rahnieda
Rahnieda 17.69
20.05.2011 23:38
jumping and summer)) dawns yes... everything is so good for me)
Slobodan Miladinović
21.05.2011 06:33
Nice portrait.
Visit70
Visit70 21.94
21.05.2011 07:46
Nice!
Aprelskaya 34.55
21.05.2011 10:27
Not a bad portrait at all. The girl is very sweet, her gaze is not empty. The only thing that bothers me is her hand. I don't like the way it's positioned; you can't see the fingers, it looks stubby.
And I'd like to tweak the color a bit; the highlights are distracting and there's too much light green.
And I like the cropping better this way View crop The branches on the left recede, so they don't distract or interrupt the frame. On the left, all that's left around the girl is foliage, which nicely frames the frame.
Raritet
Raritet 25.05
21.05.2011 16:51
View crop I wish it were just like that - and in black and white
Vladimir Prynkov (Daiwer)
21.05.2011 18:42
Nice girl!
Evgeniy Ottsetskiy (no_mad)
23.05.2011 15:30
To avoid such a painfully difficult task with color balances later, it's best to read the light right away. In this situation, it filters through the foliage and produces horrendous green reflections, which naturally doesn't brighten skin tones, for example.
And of course, there are all sorts of lighting issues, the plot isn't very good, the character is rather weak, and so on.
Marat Kuchkaev
10.10.2011 21:32
I liked the work!