Excellent point and the same work.

I'd say: nothing superfluous. )

As an off-topic comment on time: the language sensitively conveyed that time is not so much a physical as a psychological quantity. Hence the expressions: time froze, stopped, ran...))

IMHO: maybe there is too much green, take a look.

Jakov Trembovolsky (Jak Trum), Thanks for the feedback...
The work was a success, even if only one person understood or liked it...that's my opinion...
Regarding the green - maybe...I'm in the mood, I want to see it that way, or that's how I saw it...
I don't want pure black and white; it's too simple and easy a technique. The world isn't black and white, toning adds mood, and I don't want color either, especially digital...

It turns out like this...gray-colored...

Yakov Trembovolsky (Jak Trum), Green, as Wassily Kandinsky believed, is a constant absence of movement, when horizontal movements cancel each other out, destroying centrifugal and centripetal forces. Green has no overtones of joy, sadness, or passion. Gray is also soundless and motionless. But gray is an inconsolable stillness. The intensification of green creates peace amidst eternal movement. Therefore, Vladimir, possessing a subtle gift of feeling, used green to enhance the feeling of cessation of movement. This is an undoubtedly successful work and is recommended for viewing.

bk,

Good text. According to Kandinsky, it (the text) is obviously blue, with blue's inherent tendency toward depth.

Great !

Thanks for stopping by...
bk, Kostya...however...you're amazing...! This should go in the comments...
Prinata, yeah...thanks...it's all on topic...
Rakovich, thanks...